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Q168

1.定子、磁轭经过电泳，个别产品外缘尺寸超过上差；
2.定子、磁轭、线苞装配过程中，个别定子与磁轭压装挤压产生毛刺。
3.对电泳外协供应商进行管控，要求调整电泳工艺及质量控制；
4.在定子、磁轭、线苞这道装配工序后增加1道去毛刺工序，设1人进行去毛刺处理，用气枪吹和刷子刷。

wilson

1.定子、磁轭经过电泳，个别产品外缘尺寸超过上差；
When the stator and magnet yoke go through the electrophoresis, some of overall  dimensions are out of USL
2.定子、磁轭、线苞装配过程中，个别定子与磁轭压装挤压产生毛刺。
In the assembly process of stator,magnet yoke and coil,it makes some flashes on the inwall of coil due to some of stators and magnet yokes are squeezed.
3.对电泳外协供应商进行管控，要求调整电泳工艺及质量控制；
To monitor the process of  electrophoresis in supplier,and ask them to improve the technology and CP
4.在定子、磁轭、线苞这道装配工序后增加1道去毛刺工序，设1人进行去毛刺处理，用气枪吹和刷子刷。
Add one section of trimming flash after the assembly section of stator;magnet yoke and coil, set the specific operator to trim the flash ,meanwhile clean by air gun or brush.

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Q168

wilson 发表于 2012-9-20 11:41

                               
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1.定子、磁轭经过电泳，个别产品外缘尺寸超过上差；
When the stator and magnet yoke go through the elec ...

"个别", you translate "some", I suggest you   translate  "several",  waht do you consider it?

Q168

When the stator and magnet yoke go through the electrophoresis, dimensions of several parts overall are out of USL.
In the assembly process of stator, magnet yoke and coil, it makes some flashes due to several stators and magnet yokes are squeezed.
Monitor the supplier process of  electrophoresis,and ask him to improve the technology and CP.
Add one process of trimming flash after the assembly process of stator, magnet yoke and coil, then set one specific operator to trim the flash, meanwhile clean by air gun and brush.