ccsspp454 发表于 2012-9-19 22:06
Dear ccsspp454
I want to know what the password of the warehouse door . I lost my card an ...
大家记得我的8Cs吗?大家写的语法上没有大的问题了,还应当把事件的前因,后果简单的介绍一下。比如这样:
Dear XXX,
My name is YYY, and I am the supervisor of the warehouse. However, in a recent attempt, I found I was denied the access of the warehouse entry. Can you please help me reset the password, or advise me again the password? My ID is 12345567, and I may reached at (phone#) 138.......
Should you have any question, please feel free to call me.
Your early attention would be highly appreciated.
Yours,
XXXXX
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如果你和这个人很熟,并且他知道前因后果,这样写更好:
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Hey dude,
Forgot the damned password of the warehouse entry again. Help me reset it, or tell me what it is. (I owe you a bear, dude.)
Thanks a bunch.
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