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Jim 发表于 2012-9-1 13:12

                               
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The opening and closing are pretty good; however, it appears the body is empty. Why do I say so? You ...

Huang,

I plan to visit AQ next Monday and Tuesday for the issues happened during Brazil team visit. Also I will discuss the corrective actiosn of Tom's audit report.

Please update your report for the latest status.

Any problems please tell freely.

Best Regards
Jeff

Q168

Q168 发表于 2012-9-13 15:16

                               
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Huang,

I plan to visit AQ next Monday and Tuesday for the issues happened during Brazil team vis ...

Dear Jeff,
I feel regret to inform you, would you please change visit plan? because next Monday and Tuesday our company GM and me will be absent in office.
Our company product engineer Mr. liu tell me that he has received this motor technical specification EC003-95-07, if you want to know when he received it, please contact him, about seven years ago.
About the equipment procurement, we have decided to buy a new motor vibration tester.
please understand.

Best Rrgards

Huang

ccsspp454

Q168 发表于 2012-9-13 17:13

                               
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Dear Jeff,
I feel regret to inform you, would you please change visit plan? because next Monday an ...

Dear Jeff,
I feel regret to inform you, would you please change visit plan? because next Monday and Tuesday our company GM and me will be absent in office.

我觉得这样写应该比较好：
I'm sorry (that)our company GM and I will be absent in office next Monday and Tuesday. We welcome
you to our company other day.

ccsspp454

ccsspp454 发表于 2012-9-13 18:04

                               
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Dear Jeff,
I feel regret to inform you, would you please change visit plan? because next Monday an ...

Our company product engineer Mr. liu tell me that he has received this motor technical specification EC003-95-07, if you want to know when he received it, please contact him, about seven years ago.

可以改为：Our product engineer Mr. liu told me that he  received the motor technical specification EC003-95-07.if you want to know when he received it, please contact him.

Q168

Dear Jeff,
I'm sorry that our company GM and I will be absent in office next Monday and Tuesday. We welcome you to our company other day.
Our product engineer Mr. liu told me that he  received the motor technical specification EC003-95-07 about seven years ago, if you want to know details, please contact him.
About the equipment procurement, we have decided to buy a new motor vibration tester.
please understand.

Best Rrgards

Huang

ccsspp454

Q168 发表于 2012-9-13 18:57

                               
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Dear Jeff,
I'm sorry that our company GM and I will be absent in office next Monday and Tuesday. We  ...

That only my advise

stevejin

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ccsspp454

ccsspp454 发表于 2012-9-13 19:04

                               
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That only my advise

应该是
that's  only  my advise

ccsspp454

ccsspp454 发表于 2012-9-14 18:48

                               
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应该是
that's  only  my advise

Dear Jimmy
      I  want to Invite you and your wife to attend our wedding ceremony  on september  15 2012.
The party will start at 9:30 A.M.  I hope you can  get there  before 9:00 A.M and help me to entertain our colleagues.
      yours
     ccsspp454

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